fifty shades of grey by el james

Sneak Peek Critique© Of Fifty Shades Of Grey By E.L. James {VIDEO}

Sneak Peek Critiques© are all about The first 8 LINES of any book.


Most editors & literary agents know if they want to keep reading a manuscript within those first 8 sentences.

I had noticed this tendency as well, while editing many of my writing clients manuscripts.

It becomes apparent very quickly whether a writer understands their craft or not when reading their work. 


So, today we take a look at 50 Shades of Grey by E.L. James a 2011 erotic thriller.

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